jueves, 18 de marzo de 2010

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Her laugh broke the silence. After the expected time in which Erika Amanai should have died, she giggled frenetically in my face. Yes, I wrote Erika's name in my Death Note, but she did not die after the forty seconds. At that moment, I assumed that she had given me a fake name. I also considered that the fact that my Shinigami (Death God) Karemu laughed, was because she knew that it was a fake name. The supposed to be called Erika was smiling as she thought I was cooperating with her in the Kira (Killer) case. After spelling her name, I had written that the cause of death was a heart attack, I would take her away so no one could find her lying on the floor.

After a few minutes of having pressure on myself, because she was getting closer to find out I was Kira, she said she had to leave to the headquarters. I could not allow this, if she went there, it would be revealed that I was suspected of being Kira, and there was enough evidence for me to be confirmed as Kira. She started to walk away, and I realized I only had five minutes until she got there. I had to kill her before she got there, but how? An idea crawled into my brain, a brilliant one. I told her not to leave, that I had to tell her something else, something of vital importance. I told her I was part of the Kira investigation headquarters. She was surprised, and she got excited to hear such good news. I offered her a spot to work with us, but of course, I was not involved with the headquarters, it was a bluff. She said that she would completely join the case, and that she wanted to take revenge over his husband, no matter what she had to do.

It was all going as planned, she fell for my bluff. I told her that to get into the headquarters, I just needed an I.D, so I could register her information. She gave me a drivers license and confessed that she had given me a fake name before. Bingo. I told her it was okay, that it was all to protect herself from Kira. I didn't know why everyone was protecting themselves from me, even if they didn't know me. I only killed bad guys, and everyone knew it. I would never kill an innocent civilian, but she was about to reveal my true identity, and I could not allow that. I looked closely at the I.D. Misa Haruno was her real name, according to the drivers license. Carefully I introduced the name into my death note, but she thought I was only registering her information. I looked closely at my watch as the forty seconds were now in the process of murdering Misa. She then asked with a tone of voice I will never forget, "Why are you looking so closely at your watch?''. I answered with a simple "Oh, this? Well it's because... I'm Kira". Shock covered her face and body, it was success. She collapsed onto the floor after the needed forty seconds had passed. I took her away with the help of Karemu. The fact that I was Kira was fully unknown, I was suspected of being Kira, but there was no physical evidence, since I just needed a name and a face to kill. At least, I was not discovered yet...

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  2. This is a good story, it is very compelling. I have to say, it was too anime for my taste. The fact that the story is set in an anime world, may most certainly confuse the readers. Since I am familiar with anime, not exactly with this series though, I can deduce some of the plot. So, in conclusion, the story is good for an anime show...not an actual story.

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  4. This story is 100% creative. I totally congratulate you because you have managed to turn this class asignment into something fun and interesting. I am sure that whoever reads this entry will find interest and amusement within. However, it is sort of odd. In conclusion, congratulations! I truly admire your skills.

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  5. I accidentally eliminated Eduardo's commentary on my blog entry, but here it is: This is a very interesting story. It is very creative and it is something that I had never expected from one of my classmates.I think it is pretty original and I would like to hear more about your fantastic and flawless work. Also, I can't really say much about this story, I ended up completely speechless. In conclusion this is something very original and so I think that this is a perfect story.

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  7. Wow, this was definitely something i would have not expected to be a story you would make. But I must say that I was indeed kept very interested. I hope this was purely out of your imagination. not from a personal experience of anything like that. You have a very strong imagination, and i hope this is not the last time you write a story. However, it is sort of odd since we don't really read things like this.

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  8. This was 100% great, I really liked it. It is creative and interesting. It made me want to keep reading and reading.
    I really think that all the people, different age would like your essay. I found it awesome, I really liked it. Congratulations,
    I loved the fact that you put your death note or something like that,it made me have shiffers. I really appreciate you made
    this story so other people could admire you, on you great job. Good job!, I sincerely felicitate you. This was one of the best
    stories I have read.

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  9. WOW, this is a very creative story. It was all about anime, specially Death Note. You really had a good idea to write about something very interesting. I was very entertained while I was reading this story. I think that if you put some effort you could make your own characters and a setting for a great story.

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  10. Rodrigo, this is so great. This is like your death book that you took to English class right? This story is very interesting i would never had thought that this kind of writing would come from you. I congradulate you Rod, this is so very well done. I want to read another one! Please make another one?

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